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Wednesday, September 18, 2013

KWL-PLUS

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KWL-PLUS
A.     What’s KWL Plus ????
            KWL Plus is a classroom activity that can be used in lessons involving MPR content. Teachers of social studies, literature, science, math, and all other subject areas will find such activities to be especially effective for training students to be successful independent readers of electronic texts, as well as other classroom materials.
            The KWL-Plus procedure (Ogle, 1986; Carr and Ogle, 1987) works especially well with providing a structure for thinking while reading and learning. KWL is an acronym for Know, Want to Know, and Learned. This activity parallels the proficient reading strategies outlined above, and thus conditions students to engage in these thinking behaviors when they independently access electronic texts. The KWL-Plus activity includes pre-reading, during reading, and after reading phases for student learning.
            For example, students studying viruses in a science class might be reading the Minnesota Public Radio story "West Nile Virus Reaches Minnesota." How could the KWL-Plus activity be used to create a successful lesson to support student learning from this informative article?
            The KWL-Plus activity is centered around a three column graphic organizer designed to guide student thinking as they read. The graphic organizer could be created as an individual student worksheet or the entire class can participate as the teacher outlines the grid on the chalkboard or overhead transparency.
Follow the steps below and refer to the Sample KWL Grid.
Students record these items in the K column, as the teacher models with the entire class. For example: It is carried by mosquitoes; People can die from this disease; Birds can be infected by the virus.
1.      Step one Identify What You Know or Think You Know—The K
            Students contribute what they know, or think they know, about this topic. One technique is to ask each student to take a couple of minutes and, independently, make a list. Ask students what they currently know about the subject, what they have heard or read. Student contributions are recorded in the first column (K-What We Know).
·         How would a person know if they had it?
·         How deadly is this virus to people?
·         What areas of the world have the most cases?
·         Is there an effective treatment or medicine if you get it?

2.       Identify What We Want to Learn—The W
            Sharing information is likely to bring out questions that students have about the topic. Some questions might be about the accuracy of the information recorded in the "Know" column. Other questions may be things students are wondering about. Record these questions in the middle column (W-What We Want to Learn).
3.       Categorize the K and W
            Guide the students with determining meaningful categories for the items in the K and W columns. Under "Categories of Information We Expect to Use" students might decide upon the following categories: location, causes, effects, prevention.
Organizing information is the first step toward being able to effectively summarize it.
            This step is especially important to help students see that their lists do not merely contain isolated snippets of information, and it helps them sort information as they read.
4.      Read the Article
            While they read the story, students lookout for information that answers their questions or expands their understanding of the topic. When they encounter specific answers to questions and new information, they use the third column (L-What We Have Learned) to record their notes.

5.      Identify New Information
            After reading, we identify new information discovered from our reading, which is also included in the third column. New information is integrated into the previously identified categories and additional categories may need to be added.





6.      Create a Concept Map
            After completing the KWL grid, students work individually or in groups to create a concept map which connects all the information under each category into a visual display.
            The concept map allows students to see the big picture from the article, and helps them summarize and synthesize what they learned from reading this material. Information is organized for student writing assignments, test preparation, or other projects.
Let’s see example :


7.      Identify Further Investigation
After completing the concept map, students clarify what they know and make decisions as to how to obtain additional information. Questions from the middle column (Want to Know) that are not answered by the reading provide impetus for further investigation.

Sample of Lesson
Students studying viruses in a science class might be reading the Minnesota Public Radio story "West Nile Virus Reaches Minnesota." How could the KWL-Plus activity be used to create a successful lesson to support student learning from this informative article?

West Nile virus reaches Minnesota
By
Tom Scheck
Minnesota Public Radio
July 24, 2002
State epidemiologist Harry Hull says he's not surprised West Nile virus has shown up in the state. It's already been found in 32 other states. He says the virus has been steadily moving west and south after it first appeared in New York City in 1999. Hull says reports of cases in surrounding states made him anticipate the first case would surface in Minnesota this year.
Hull says the virus carrying crows were found in Golden Valley and Isle, which sits on the south shore of Lake Mille Lacs.
"This is exactly what we expected. We suspect that the risk will continue through August and early September, until we get our first freeze and the mosquito population dies off," he says.
Hull says West Nile virus is spread by mosquitoes which feed on infected birds. Those infected mosquitoes then infect other animals, mainly other birds, horses and people. The virus can only be spread by mosquitoes. There's no danger of human infection through exposure to other infected animals or birds.
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Mosquito
West Nile virus is spread by mosquitos that feed on infected animals. It was first detected in the U.S. in 1999, in New York City. New York health official Kristine Smith talked to MPR's All Things Considered host Lorna Benson about how it was discovered. Listen to the interview.
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Hull says less than 1 percent of the population who are infected by a mosquito will develop West Nile encephalitis, which causes swelling of the brain. The Centers for Disease Control in Atlanta says 152 people have been infected with West Nile encephalitis since 1999, leading to 18 deaths.
There's no known treatment, but the virus is most dangerous to people with weak immune systems and the elderly. Hull says people who contract West Nile virus experience flu-like symptoms, headaches, a high fever and convulsions.
"The risk to individuals is low. You're unlikely to contract the virus, and even if you do you're unlikely to get ill," he says.
Hull says he expects more cases of West Nile virus. He says Minnesotans should not be alarmed, but advises people to take precautions to try to avoid mosquito bites. He recommends wearing long-sleeved clothing and mosquito repellant, and avoiding outdoor activities at dusk and dawn.
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Jim Stark
Jim Stark with the Metropolitan Mosquito Control District says his agency will increase its testing for the virus in captured mosquitoes. He doesn't believe the district will increase spraying, unless the virus turns up in a larger number of animals or mosquitoes.
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Jim Stark with the Metropolitan Mosquito Control District says his agency will increase its testing for the virus in captured mosquitoes. He doesn't believe the district will increase spraying.
"We've got one bird here in the metro area, so we haven't found a wide range of birds being infected. We haven't found any mosquitoes being infected with West Nile. So the next step would be finding numerous birds and mosquito pools that have the virus in them," says Stark.
Animal health officials say over 100 different birds are known to carry the virus. They say poultry are generally safe, since chickens and turkeys produce natural antibodies if they're infected.
But horses are a different situation. The University of Minnesota's Will Hueston says one-third of the unvaccinated horses who contract West Nile virus die from it. He says many horse owners in the state vaccinated their horses for West Nile encephalitis when it was first reported in 1999. However, he urges all horse owners to have their animals vaccinated with the annual treatment.
"We know now that West Nile has been identified in crows, so the vaccine won't be 100 percent protection at this point. You need to have enough time for the body to develop its immune system to respond to the virus. But that having been said, vaccinating now is better than nothing," says Hueston.
There was a shortage of vaccine earlier this year, but Dr. Kathy Ott, a veterinarian with the Equine Medical Center in Lakeville, says it's now close to full supply. She predicts that a number of horses will be infected with West Nile virus this year.
"I would certainly believe that there's horses in Minnesota that will come down with it. Maybe not so much in the Twin Cities - primarily because the level of education and knowledge, and the value of the horses, has prompted most of the owners in this area to vaccinate their horses this spring," Ott says. "But in some of the outlying areas people aren't as up on their vaccinations, and those are probably the horses - in northern Minnesota, that type of thing - where you'll see more of the cases."
Meanwhile, Hull says the Health Department will increase testing of dead birds to see if the virus is spreading. He says department officials are concerned about the virus, but more worried about other health problems, mainly E. coli poisoning and bioterrorism.

Topic: West Nile Virus
"
West Nile Virus Reaches Minnesota"
K (Know)
W (Want to Know)
L (Learned)
  • Is carried by mosquitoes
  • Is a disease that can kill people
  • Crows can be infected
  • Carried to US from Africa
  • Has appeared in the Midwestern US
  • You should use lots of mosquito spray
  • You can get a high fever
  • You get sick like you have the flu
  • They have it in Minnesota now
  • Is there an effective treatment or medicine?
  • How can you tell which mosquitoes have it?
  • If you get it once, can you get it again?
  • Can you get it from a diseased bird?
  • How deadly is this virus to humans?
  • Does the virus affect animals other than birds?
  • What part of the US or world has the most cases?
  • P-long-sleeved clothes, insect repellant, avoid outdoors dawn & dusk
  • E-100 types of birds have it; poultry have natural antibodies
  • P-horses should have vaccination
  • E-1/3 unvaccinated horses die from it
  • L-1st found in New York in 1999
  • L-found in 32 states
  • C-only spread by mosquitoes that feed on infected birds
  • E-infects birds, horses, people
  • C-can't get it from infected animals
  • E-1% of people get encephalitis, swelling of brain, can die
  • P-no treatment
  • E-hits elderly & weak immune systems
  • E-usually like flu: headache, high fever, convulsions
  • E-low risk to people

Categories of Information We Expect to Use:
  1. Where is it located (L-Location)
  2. What causes it (C-Causes)
  3. What impact it has (E-Effects)
  4. What can be done about it (P-Prevention)

Saturday, June 15, 2013

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

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A.    Definition of Argumentative Essay
An argumentative essay is an essay that is written to provide a persuasive argument to an opposing audience in order to change their minds.
In an argumentative essay the writer is trying to convince the reader by demonstrating the truth or falsity of a topic. The writer’s position will be backed up with certain kinds of evidence, like statistics or opinions of experts. The writer is not just giving an opinion, but making an argument for or against something and supporting that argument with data.
B.     The Function of Argumentative Essay
            The function of an argumentative essay is to show that your assertion (opinion, theory, hypothesis) about some phenomenon or phenomena is correct or more truthful than others'. The art of argumentation is not an easy skill to acquire. Many people might think that if one simply has an opinion, one can argue it successfully, and these folks are always surprised when others don't agree with them because their logic seems so correct. Argumentative writing is the act of forming reasons, making inductions, drawing conclusions, and applying them to the case in discussion; the operation of inferring propositions, not known or admitted as true, from facts or principles known, admitted, or proved to be true. It clearly explains the process of your reasoning from the known or assumed to the unknown. Without doing this you do not have an argument, you have only an assertion, an essay that is just your unsubstantiated opinion.
            Notice that you do not have to completely prove your point; you only have to convince reasonable readers that your argument or position has merit; i.e., that it is somehow more accurate and complete than competing arguments.      

Argumentative essays are often organized in the following manner:
  1. They begin with a statement of your assertion, its timeliness, significance, and relevance in relation to some phenomenon.
  2. They review critically the literature about that phenomenon.
  3. They illustrate how your assertion is "better" (simpler or more explanatory) than others, including improved (i.e., more reliable or valid) methods that you used to accumulate the data (case) to be explained.
Finally revise and edit, and be sure to apply the critical process to your argument to be certain you have not committed any errors in reasoning or integrated any fallacies for which you would criticize some other writer.
C.    The Characteristic of Argumentative Essay
An argumentative essay attempts to be highly persuasive and logical. It usually assumes that the reader disagrees with the writer, but it should be noted that the reader is no less intelligent than the writer. Hence an argumentative essay should be written objectively, logically and respectfully.

When planning an argumentative essay, be aware that the essay should contain the following characteristics:
·         The argumentative essay introduces and explains the issue or case. The reader needs to know what the issue is going to be.
·         The essay offers reasons, and supports these reasons.
·         The essay should prove its point.
·         The essay, at times, refutes (proves wrong) opposing arguments.



D.    The Structure of the Argumentative Essay
1.      Introduction
The first paragraph is the introductory paragraph. It introduces the problem and gives the background information necessary for the argument and the thesis statement.
2.      Body
The body paragraphs contain the reasons. Each paragraph talks about one reason. The reason is stated in the topic sentence and is supported by supporting details or materials. These supporting materials can be either examples, statistics, personal experiences, or quotations.
3.      Conclusion
The conclusion restates the main claim and presents one or two general statements which accurately summarize the arguments which support the main premise.

USEFUL TIPS for ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAYS
To write well developed paragraphs:
Ø  Avoid strong feelings (don’t say: nobody does this, or it is impossible to disagree with me)
Ø  Use generalizations (e.g. people say/believe/consider)
Ø  Do not use generalization (e.g. everybody believes that…..)
Ø  Do not use strong personal expressions (e.g. I think)
Ø  Use linking words (e.g. therefore, although, however etc.)
Ø  Use sequencing (e.g. firstly, secondly, lastly)
Ø  Make reference to other sources (e.g. The government claims that…)
Ø  Give examples – not personal thoughts (e.g. products such as sprayer can destroy the environment)
Ø  Give up banal introductions. Write something more original (Don’t write: This topic has been important since ancient times. When? Too vague = unclear)

Argumentative Essay Topics

            Argumentative essays can be written on many different topics. Delicate approach to choice of a topic or keen understanding of the given topic is the key element of good essay writing.    Here you can see some examples of argumentative essay topics:
  1. argumentative essay on gender issues
  2. argumentative essay on local produce and organic produce
  3. argumentative essay on feminism
  4. modern technology argumentative essay
  5. hybrid cars argumentative essays
  6. argumentative essay on obesity
  7. argumentative essay on child obesity
  8. from animal cruelty to serial murder argumentative essay
  9. argumentative essay on drinking and driving
            If you hesitate either on choosing the essay topic or the idea for argumentative essay please feel free to contact us and we gladly help you any time you need assistance.


E.      Examples of Argumentative Essay
Why Women Should Not Have an Abortion
Many women in the entire world have abortions. Women believe there are many reasons to abort such as fear of having or raising a child, rape, or not having enough money. But whatever the situation, there is never an acceptable reason to get an abortion. Some important reasons why women should not abort have to do with human values, religious values, and values of conscience.
            The first reason why women should not have an abortion is related to basic human values. Women need to think about their unborn babies who are not responsible for this situation. These unborn babies should have the privilege to live and grow into a normal person. Women need to be more humanitarian and less egoistic with these babies. On the other hand, the baby doesn’t know how or why he is here. It is not necessary to kill a life; there are many other solutions to resolve this problem short of abortion.
            The second reason why women should not abort has to do with religious values. In almost all religions, a woman is not permitted to have an abortion. If they do, their religions will punish them. In some religions, for example, a woman cannot take communion after having an abortion, and before taking communion again, she must do many things as a form of penitence. In whatever religion, abortion is punished and for this reason, women should not abort.
            Finally, the third and most important reason why women should not
abort is the related to her conscience. When a woman has an abortion, she will always think about the baby she might have had. She will always believe about the future that could have happened with her baby which will always remind her that she killed it. Because she has had an abortion, she will never have a good life, and her conscience will remind her of what she had done. Because a woman who has an abortion can’t forget about what she has done, these thoughts will always be with her, and the results can be calamitous.
            There are many reasons why women should not have an abortion. The truth is that women need to think about the consequences that can occur before having sexual relations. I think that the effects of an abortion can be very sad for everyone involved, both for the woman who has the abortion and for the family who lives with her.

Why You Should Not Smoke
By Luisa Moad  ITESM, Campus Queretaro  Advanced English C
I am sure that you know that smoking harms your body. Then why do you continue smoking? Maybe you do it because you haven’t really become conscious about all the effects that smoking has. There are a lot of reasons why you shouldn’t smoke. Some of them are that smoking affects your health, that you spend a lot of money on cigarettes, and that when you smoke you are not respecting people around you.
The first reason why you shouldn’t smoke is that smoking affects your health. If you smoke, your physical condition will be negatively affected, so it will be very difficult for you to succeed in sports. Also, smoking produces lethal diseases like cancer and reduces the length and quality of your life. Maybe you don’t notice all the physical effects of smoking immediately, but you surely will be sorry one day.
The second reason why you shouldn’t smoke is because of all the money that you spend on it. Maybe you start smoking only when someone offers you a cigarette, but there will be a day when you will feel the need of a cigarette. By this time, you will pay whatever to smoke, and each time you will smoke more, so you will spend more money. All the money you would spend on cigars could have be spent in something better, don’t you think?
The last reason why you shouldn’t smoke is out of respect for the people around you. When you smoke, you not only harm yourself, but you also harm all the people around you. So you mustn’t be selfish; you should at least avoid smoking in front of people who don’t smoke. Also, many people don’t like the cigarette’s smell, so they won’t enjoy your company. Would you like that?
I have said just some reasons of why you shouldn’t smoke, so I hope that now those of you who smoke are able to think a little and try to make a smart decision. In addition to all the reasons I’ve said, I would like you to think about how much you love yourself and then whether you want to continue harming yourself. Think also about all the people who love you, like your family who doesn’t want to see you suffering or sick. If you decide to continue smoking, what a pity. But if you decide to stop smoking, congratulations! Remember that "If you can dream it, you can do it."


F.     How to Write an Argumentative Essay
 An argumentative essay uses reasoning and evidence—not emotion—to take a definitive stand on a controversial or debatable issue. The essay explores two sides of a topic and proves why one side or position is the best.
1.      The First Steps
·         Choose a specific issue to discuss.  Some debatable issues cover a wide range of topics.  For example, “legalizing drugs” is too broad a subject because topics within that issue include legalizing marijuana, the effectiveness of the FDA, or whether a painkiller made in Europe should be allowed into the US.  Any of these could be the sole focus of an argumentative paper.  
·         Research both sides of the topic thoroughly. Even if you know which side you want to argue, research can give you ideas for counterarguments and help your paper show balance rather than bias.
·         Develop a working thesis that states your position on the issue and summarizes your argument’s main reasons. Your body paragraphs should explain your reasons fully. 
2.      Body Paragraphs
a.         Present both sides of the issue, then state your opinion and explain why you chose that side. This option is useful if you did not have an opinion on the issue prior to research, or your audience is not very familiar with your topic. 
·         One half to two-thirds of your paper explains the issue, shows the two opposing sides, and gives an assessment of each.  This demonstrates that you have indeed conducted research and are an expert on the subject.  
·         Next, when you state your position, readers might be more inclined to agree with you.
·         Last, explain your reasons for choosing that side without repeating ideas from previous paragraphs.  
b.         State your opinion at the beginning.  List and explain the reasons for your choice. Acknowledge the other side’s arguments; then, disprove/refute those arguments. This option is useful when your audience already has some knowledge of the issue.  It allows you to be more assertive, thus making a stronger argument.  
·         Select the strongest evidence from your research and present your points—usually one point per body paragraph. 
·         Next, explain one or two of the opposing side’s points to show how readers might object to your argument. Then, show how these arguments are not reasonable, not logical, or not effective.  Be sure to reassert your own viewpoint and why it is the best choice.
c.       Final Steps: Revise and Edit
·         Pretend that your readers are a skeptical panel or jurors. You can best convince them of your arguments by avoiding emotional or aggressive language and by using a mix of evidence types—facts, statistics, examples, expert opinions, or even personal experience. 
·         Cite your sources!
·         To increase the chances that your audience will agree with you, start body paragraphs with ideas that both sides agree upon before arguing your point.
·         Know the other side’s strongest arguments to defend against challenges from other students or your instructor.
·         In your conclusion, emphasize why your topic is important, summarize your arguments,
·         and re-state your position as the most sensible choice. Do not include new evidence or arguments.

 

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